Sue Doku - OC
Added 2019-03-26 15:24:45 +0000 UTCThis's another original character commission I did and I'll include it in term 42!
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Thank you Ciarán! I really appreciate the time and effort you put into writing detailed feedbacks for my works! :)
Elyza
2019-03-27 09:56:40 +0000 UTCXD
Elyza
2019-03-27 09:47:38 +0000 UTCOoooooh, now that is a delightfully naughty and sexy pose, I love it! 😻😻😻😻😻 Starting off, this background is great with a lot of detail and textures to it. The overall colour tones are so warm and inviting with all of the brightly lit wooden textures with a grey, stone wall to add some cool-contrasts. I actually really like those wooden pillars, the varied lighting and colours across both of them as well as the shadows they cast. The warm orange glow coming from above that tints the grey wall with particle effects throughout the background are also very nice. And I do really like the wooden barrel to her right with the smooth but still textured surface and how the metal rings are clearly separated from the wood by their own occlusion shadows. And lastly, the multi-coloured, textured wooden floor looks terrific too. As for the character herself, she is looking very fine! 😉😻😻😻 As I said, I adore her pose, the coy way that she leans her head as she smiles is so endearing, the bending of the fingers of both hands is well done as she grips both her skirt and the bench, while her legs look absolutely gorgeous as they elegantly flow and bend. I also like the asymmetry of her arms with one lowered and raised, while one leg is stretched out further than the other. The actual rendering and lighting for Sue (love the punny name too 😹) are gorgeous with a major, warm light source hitting her from one side, creating a great contrast with light and shadow across her body, most notable on her hair, right arm and right leg. Looking at her clothes first, I really like her rippling right sleeve with the warm light and dark tones, with the hard contrast really defining the folds in the material. Her bra is so very sexy and I really like the patterns and slight shine to the material that we see on her right breast. All of those little white "petals" (I don't know what to call them 😅) that frame her chest and breast are all given a great amount of individual definition and I just adore her skirt. The way the edges look both on the outside (on her right side) and on the inside are terrific with the material folding nicely. The entire underside of her skirt as it pulls away from her body is also very well done with the rendering of the folds and the softness of the brush-strokes. Sue herself is just lovely! The contrast across her hair with glowing, radiant gold light shining along the edges against the shadow across most of the rest of it is so striking and you put a great deal of effort into the detail of so many strands. Her face is very cute too with her green eyes really popping out and that smile is adorable. I also love the rim-lighting across her neck and clavicles and the separating from the shadows. And this applies to both the SFW and NSFW versions, the framing of her breasts as they spill out from her top, overlapping the white materials while also being partially squished together is just so damned sexy! 😻😻😻😻😻 The actual rendering of her breasts is gorgeous too with such softly rendered skin tones and great use of light and shadow to define their forms, I particularly like the warm light glowing down from the top left of the image, hitting her right breast stronger than the left. Her right arm and both of her legs also benefit greatly from the strong source of warm light shining from one side, the adjacent core-shadows and bounce lights define all of those forms perfectly! I particularly like her right leg with the especially strong contrast across her thigh, knee and calf, with all of those tones beautifully defining her elegant, sensual forms. Her left leg looks fantastic too of course and I really like the cooler, light that runs along the inside of her thigh towards the top plane of her knee (but hot damn, that warm light along her right thigh really is strikingly beautiful). Absolutely outstanding work on this piece! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 The character is a total cutie-pie, the surroundings are beautifully painted with a pleasingly warm colour-palette across the whole painting, while I also absolutely adore the sexy and naughty pose for the character (it cannot be overstated just how well you did with her breasts and the sensual way that they're accentuated by spilling out of her top and overlapping the cool white material, really making the skin tones pop)
Ciarán M
2019-03-26 21:29:43 +0000 UTCSue Doku....I get it xD
Reny the Fox
2019-03-26 16:14:53 +0000 UTC
