Torian x Mako (Term 41)

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Elyza

I'd honestly love to commission a version of this with just Mako. I get jealous of seeing my baby girl with others.

Iain Ó Murchadha

Thanks Berserker79! :)

Elyza

This is a couple I didn't expect to see, but that of course does not mean that I don't like it. Quite to the contrary, I really like to see the two of them together, you've managed to drawn them in a way that looks both cute and sexy. Well done!

Thanks again Ciarán for your detailed feekback! I'm glad you think the picture has captured the intimacy between them :)

Elyza

Hmm, I've played quite a bit of The Old Republic but only ever as the Sith so I'm not familiar with these characters. I can say however that I love what you've done with them! 😸 Before i get to the characters, I will quickly say that I really like the background here, the cool-grey tones of the moon as well as the metal behind them really let's their warm skin tones pop from the background. On that same topic, the blue of his eyes and grey of her underwear also contrast very nicely with those same skin tones, while Mako's darker skin also looks extra nice against his paler tones. As for the poses here, you did a great job on selling the intimacy between them, the way she gently caresses his face, while he holds her waist are both wonderfully romantic touches. And going back to the difference in skin tones, I do really like how his lighter-toned fingers look when they wrap around her caramel skin (I confess, I'm quite jealous of him 😹). The eye-contact between the two of them is also very nice and there's something about this kind of pose, the woman with her back to the man as she turns to look at him, that is very alluring and sensual. The rendering of both characters is terrific and a major aspect that stands out to me is your great use of rim-lighting. In the case of both characters, the bright lights illuminating the top planes of their hair is so very striking and really accentuates those areas. On Torian specifically, the rim-lighting also looks excellent in how it further defines the shapes of his shoulder and arm. While on Mako, I love how it illuminates her hand as she touches him, as well as adding extra depth and detail to her forearm, especially her elbow area, as well as her left shoulder and how it connects to her neck and clavicle. As for Torian specifically, you did a great job on the hair and how the flat spiked strands of hair overlap as they run down towards his fringe. His vibrant blue eyes pop really well and are very striking against the surrounding warm tones and I do love how well you've rendered her shoulder/deltoid and his tensed bicep. And like I said before, his hands and fingers look marvellous as they hold Mako and wrap around the forms of her waist, I especially like how his thumbs spread out too, as if he's trying to caress as much of her as possible... and who can blame him? 😹 And as for Mako, oh she looks magnificent! You did a marvellous job on her hair as the long strands sweep back over her head, while adding a great amount of detail to the hair, once again, the bright rim-lighting really makes it look so good! Her face is gorgeous and I really like her expression as her eye isn't fully open as she gazes into his baby-blues, all while her lips part in a soft smile. The rendering across her whole body is amazing, like I said before, the rim-lighting really gives so much more detail to her neck/shoulder areas. While in general, her neck and clavicles even without the rim-lighting have so much detail to them, while I also like the subtle and softly defined planes of her pecs as her breasts sit upon them. Her raised forearm/elbow are so well done with the twisting of her forearm and the way the bending joint of her elbow is defined. Her breasts are so very soft and smoothly painted, having quite the sensual feel to them. Her toned mid-section looks fantastic too and just like with her breasts, the soft and smooth blending of tones give her such a wonderful skin texture, while her forms are just so appealing. And lastly, her hips and thighs look terrific, the rim-lighting on her right thigh is a great choice, letting the skin tone pop even more against his dark pants behind it. While I love how the darker tones on the insides of her thighs further accentuate the shapes of her toned legs. Excellent job on this piece! 👏👏👏👏👏 You really did well capturing that sense of romance and intimacy between the characters, while both of them are so well painted and rendered.

Ciarán M