Undercover Blonde Ch. 04
Added 2025-05-06 03:00:04 +0000 UTCJoeβs alarm shattered the silence at 6 AM, the
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What the?.. Kenny Wright in the house!
Chris K
2025-06-07 22:49:16 +0000 UTCNice chapter developing all of your secondary characters. Would like to read more about how she feels about the duo and intimacy with another woman for the first time. That's a big line to cross, especially if she's never even considered it.
Kenny Wright
2025-06-04 14:41:20 +0000 UTCLove this comment! Love how youβre picking up on small things
Eddie Wilder
2025-05-07 05:10:09 +0000 UTCInteresting chapter! First, Sam's almost obsession over Evie. That'll be interesting if it develops. Second, Evie's meeting G&L. Glad she took a stand against their BS. Almost wished she told them no more free dances, pay up like everyone else! Lol. And third, Evie usually ends the night thinking of Joe. Not this time! She already thought of her life as "her old life" in this chapter. Foreshadowing?? Awesome work EW. π
Chris K
2025-05-07 02:56:49 +0000 UTC
