PS outtakes- pt. 66 Outside
Added 2022-04-25 23:31:01 +0000 UTCSo I know this isn't smut but y'know Patreon is about other fun stuff. Like the things I don't want anyone to see lol. Compare this with the pt. 66 I posted in the canon and see why I didn't like this one. This was a really important scene, I didn't want it to go this way. That's what I get for writing without a script sometimes lol.
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YEAH okay thank you!
2022-04-26 15:33:57 +0000 UTCYeah, even though tiny Victor is funny and cute, I feel like the other version you posted is far better. It really carries the emotional weight of someone who was trapped in one spot for years finally being free. This version, though charming, may be too chaotic and casual for such a big moment.
NightSmudge
2022-04-26 00:49:19 +0000 UTC
