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Wayfarer Remix 08

Writing 101: Your character either has daddy issues or mommy issues. 

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Wayfarer Remix 08

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Is it overly dependent if he pays for everything for her? I mean, he's only giving her a couple thousand a week.

Brian Christy Burke

Depending on the definition of issue, it seems like Yuri might have both? She's distant from her mother, but seemingly overly dependent on her father?

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Damn it... I can't do anything right.

Brian Christy Burke

A possible grammar note, ‘I can sympathies with that.’ might be ‘I can sympathize with that.’

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