I wanted to post this with the edited page 1 as well as with page 3, but unfortunately the third page isn't quite finished yet and I'd rather make sure this went up in October!
I do like this page more than the first one. I think the style will receive another update on page 4 though still...
Page 3 should be up very shortly - my focus right now though is to finish the Halloween illustrations while they're still relevant XD