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*New Story* Girls and Bridle - Chapter 5 - Together - Part 2

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Happy Friday!

This is the second and final part of Girls and Bridle - Chapter 5. It's probably one of my favorite so far, if not my favorite.

Hemlock is still trying to resolve her conflict with Brittany, while Morning Star and Moonlight are still trying to learn how to work together with Ivory.

I like the two storylines that intersects in the middle. :) I'm very happy with it.

Girls and Bridle is the only story that I can repeatedly re-read without getting tired of it. :) I love my ponies.

TS

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oh... that would be too sad. I don't think I want to do that to her. :(

So, I finally had time to catch up on this story. That are some interesting turns you took here. And of course there's the question, if Hemlock will throw away her prized autograph in the end because of disappointment in her former idol... :D

the_iceman

Hehe. I don't think Sophie could breath the same air as Brittany. ;) It was wiser to seek shelter elsewhere. With Stardust around, I think things are going to get serious.

Somehow my guess was that they would end up at Sophie's stable when they left from Pauls. Would have made for an interesting encounter for sure. I totally didn't expect Stardust to appear again this soon, definitely a positive surprise though. This has become my favourite story so far (well besides animal cafe that is :)

I am sure you will amaze us.

Thanks. Now the challenge is to write the next few chapters and head towards a conclusion. I know how it will end, but I'm not quite sure how to get there yet.

really like the story. no spoilers here.


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