*New Story* Dive - Chapter 1 - Valhalla

I agree with Linus that from here you can go so many places. This is the necessary introduction and getting-stuck phase. She now has learned to make better use of her assistant, so she's slowly growing her knowledge and skills of gaming. Edit: although all the kissing definitely increases my expectations that there will be some erotic/kink exploration in the future

Sjoerd

It's definitely been different from your usual stories in the sense that there are less fetish related elements but in my opinion that's refreshing and fits the story. There are so many options you can chose to go from there. Including RPG or more fetish related elements if you want to. Or just a plain adventure/fantasy setting focusing on consciousness and emotions of an AI (e.g. which 'reality' is 'real'), which would be my personal favourite. Just saying, not everything has to be about sex, far from it. (Obviously ;) ) us readers don't mind that but you should experiment on different stories/genres. Those who don't like them still get to read your other stories.

I'm sorry that you disliked the story that much, but I'm grateful that you left a honest comment. Your analysis is clashing with my intentions. The hardware of the game to me was irrelevant, it was simply a sword art online way to connect to the game and get stuck in it. For the rest, I simply wanted to present a world that we know nothing about and making the reader discover it at the same time as the main character, and through sexy interactions. But I hear you. I will let the other patrons comment further and go from there.

No, just No... I like the LitRPG idea, but maybe not all random next time. Perhaps buying a game and not realizing that the black 'under-suit' is really a latex catsuit? Maybe not realizing that the game-world is normalized as much more fetish friendly... Perhaps as a result of turning the Adult Filters off. That way at least the game would make sense to us. Also, there is no way a new person would not learn how to used the equipment and game interface that they bought when they do not like tech. They would be too scared not to learn. You can off-set that but having most of that knowledge mostly apply to the set-up and not the game-play.

MND

Yeah, I know. Its called TS' laziness. ;) ... Perhaps it could be my new year resolution.

Thanks for another series. one question: author name in epub is 'Chapter 1' (not 'TS'/'Tigerstretch'). This is also happens for other books. So I have to manually fix this before importing to reader. 'Series' / 'Number in series' metatags are also not configured (which would be nice to have if possible).

Vikarti Anatra