*New Story* Animal Café - Chapter 16 - The pain of pets
Added 2020-12-03 22:27:43 +0000 UTCHappy Friday! (yeah, I know, it's not Friday yet)
Here is chapter 16 of Animal Café. Take a deep breath because it a bit longer than the previous chapters. I took a big risk here, but I think most of you will appreciate. I'm writing stories to convey emotions. I hope I will make your little heart beat during this chapter.
This is the first part of the much longer Holiday chapter that will be published later this month.
Enjoy! And if you post a comment, try not to spoil the story for others.
TS
Comments
Thanks and welcome. :) Glad you enjoyed it.
2020-12-25 15:22:56 +0000 UTCWith every story written, you rise to new heights.
2020-12-25 14:40:06 +0000 UTCThanks, Throwcat. I appreciate your good words. :)
2020-12-24 01:00:46 +0000 UTCAn aboslute emotonal rolar coaster. Great work! Though this story you have done a good job of natural character development. Her advancement into becoming more social felt smooth and natural that I never noticed when she started speaking in full sentences. It made it all the harder when the other shoe dropped. once again, you should be commended for your writing skill.
Throwcat2
2020-12-24 00:25:31 +0000 UTCIndeed. :)
2020-12-05 23:38:58 +0000 UTCHehe.... Perfection is a bit too much, but I'm pretty happy with it. :)
2020-12-05 23:38:27 +0000 UTCI liked it , added depth to the character and sets up a nice springboard for growth
Leon
2020-12-05 16:54:16 +0000 UTCAs always perfection
2020-12-05 13:58:58 +0000 UTChehe... who knows. ;)
2020-12-05 05:52:25 +0000 UTCnot too delayed comment for the first time in a while! yay for pets!!! Also sadness but hopefully happiness to come!
2020-12-05 01:21:52 +0000 UTCChristmas will be a beautiful story.
2020-12-04 23:28:49 +0000 UTCIt seems my guess was [spoiler override] ;) Good story, sometimes a story needs to be shaken up in such a way. I'm looking forward to the Christmas continuation.
Sjoerd
2020-12-04 21:38:44 +0000 UTC
