*New Story* The Sun I Can't See - Chapter 4 (part 1)

Hehe, I didn't expect it either. When they first kissed by accident, it was there for fun and to create a little cliffhanger. but then, when I started to write chapter 4 I needed another character for a ladies night and, of course, Mary was a prime choice. I used her for humor again when Alex tricked her to go to a quiet night out. But then, when they met Nyssa, I was like "Aaaah... why not! Alex would love a guide dog. ;) It was awesome. As for Miles... yeah, he has little demons. It's clear that he loves Alex, but he is a bit obsessed with his kinks at the moment. ;)

Your stories are always refreshing to read. I didn't expect Alex and her sister to get along regarding their kinky interests so well. Definitely liked her helping Alex as a 'guide dog' if that makes sense, a new aproach to their relationship without crossing the bondaries of them being sisters. Also I think it's a good idea having Alex think about what she really wants out of a relationship, it can't only be about kinks after all. In that case Miles and her breaking up makes sense to me if he's mainly interested in latex/sex and doesn't really care about her interests.

Maybe Apricot will start dating Alex instead. ;)

So happy because Miles isn't there anymore, but I know he will be back :(

Thanks Leon. Talking about that, I just finished the first editing pass on Trish the waitress part 3, and it felt so good because of the reason you just mentioned. Whether or not people like part 3, Im pretty darn proud of it. :)

The way this series elevates BDSM from simple harsh dom wimpy sub to complex people interacting makes me genuinely happy

Leon

Yes, it was a bit of a right angle turn, but I'm happy I did it. Part 2 is coming soon. :)

Thanks! The story took some unexpected turns (unexpected for me at least), but that's another part of what makes it great to read :)

Sjoerd

yep... The journey is what is fun. :)

Thanks Val. :) Yeah, Nyssa is pretty cool. To be honest don't like the stereotypical Mistress that are all mighty powerful, strict, mean and stuff. It's not for me. So I crafted Nyssa in a way that is more gentle, intelligent, and playful, but at the same time a bit motherly in a way that she is trying to help others.

I think you really fall in love with the journey not with the destination

great story again. Enjoyed the flow to the story. Nyssa is an interesting character. thanks for sharing

I hope too. When I wrote this story I didn't think it would end up like this. :)

I like how we get to see things trough Alex's perspective and feel for her blind disability. I am really hooked for the next part. I hope her sister will be a good dogo