JAYBOOK(LADYBEAR'S TRY OUT3)
Added 2018-06-03 18:08:17 +0000 UTCThis book is way down the line...like I said I outline books way ahead of time...sketch up some scenes just to see how the story will flow...do re-writes...etc...the way these pics are now...MAY not be the same when I do the actual story...Bear may not be in that fish net suit...she might be nude...or in another outfit...etc...her opponent might be a black girl..a green lizard babe...This story puts Lee and Bear in an interesting situation(I LOVE story twists!) Bear and Lee know each other from Anfer...and are friends...Lee and Sleeker are close friends...Bear is working for SPAIC...trying to infiltrate the Sleeker Girls and bring them down...Bear has an..''oh shit!'' moment, when she goes into the private Sleeker Girl try out...and sees Lee there!If Sleeker finds out Lady Bear is a cop...Lady Bear is dead! Bear has to get rid of Lee...she calls her out....Lee isnt stupid...and knows what Bear is doing...Lee also is a thrill seeker...and always wanted to know if she can take Bear on...which Bear is counting on...so she hopes Lee accepts her challenge and that she can kill Lee...Lee cant help herself...she accepts...Lydia Cornell is secretly taping the action...unbeknown to the ladies.
Comments
thanks Molly. thats what I hope for. that the story makes sense to the reader. I love stories like this. Multiple agendas...twisted women...and action!(hopefully sexy action!)this is down the line for the Sleeker series...where I hope to explore Lee and Sleekers friend ship. Gwen has interesting story lines coming up also. I am always plotting and outlining...and re-writing.
Jerrie46
2018-06-03 18:27:44 +0000 UTCHeh, there are always multiple agendas going on in your stories. Thumbs up on realizing that every character needs to have a motivation for what they're doing in order for the story to make sense.
Molly Whipple
2018-06-03 18:13:52 +0000 UTC
