The thumb-nailing for part 1 is complete! I managed to shave off a page from the original (bottom) and add in more dialogue to pack in a little bit more story on the new one (top)!
I'm excited to continue on this again ?
Here's a slightly closer peek at the new pages. it's blurry af currently because of the fact that these are just thumbs. but they will be bigger very soon!
Update: 6/8/19: part 2 is also planned out! The total page count (excluding covers/filler pages) went from 30 to 18! That's waaaaay more doable. Enjoy ?
