お互いの体が入れ替わってしまったハスミとコハル (japanese/en/kor)
Added 2024-10-02 15:24:30 +0000 UTC私は一人で翻訳をしているので、文章が不自然なところがあるかもしれません。間違った部分を指摘していただければ、少しずつ成長した姿をお見せします！10月も頑張ります！ I'm translating on my own, so the sentences might be awkward. If you point out any mistakes, I'll show you my progress! I'll work hard in October too! 저 혼자 번역을 하고 있어서 문장이 어색할 수 있습니다 잘못된 부분을 지적해주시면 점점 발전된 모습을 보여드리겠습니다! 10월도 열심히 하겠습니다!
Comments
Amazing work, I love how you draw Hasumi, please more of her in the future
kurama999tail
2024-10-03 18:22:34 +0000 UTCI'm glad I was able to help you! (^-^)
lllllllolllllll
2024-10-03 09:40:50 +0000 UTCI wrote the lines again as you suggested! It was a great help! Thank you so much!
B-Tsukael
2024-10-03 06:49:42 +0000 UTC와 살이 5kg 찐 코하루랑 아가랑 아가밥으로 8kg 늘어난 하스미...
tavitavida
2024-10-03 02:24:34 +0000 UTCThank you!!!
B-Tsukael
2024-10-02 21:29:22 +0000 UTCThe translation is fine but maybe you could have said: Senpai's boobs "are" really big, in the first panel and maybe in the last panel say: You have been cumming inside more than I thought. For everything else you did a great job!
lllllllolllllll
2024-10-02 19:38:55 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!! I love it!!! ❤❤🤤🤤🤤🤤
lllllllolllllll
2024-10-02 18:23:42 +0000 UTC
