Kuroinu, New Lore, New Characterization, At a Cross roads
Added 2019-09-14 17:38:04 +0000 UTCSo, Last night I Learned someone uploaded Kuroinu Chapter 1 on Youtube with no H Scenes, which honestly is good because that means I don't have to deal with the rape BS, Seriously its like 40 minutes of nothing but moaning, So I spent all last night Watching and Reading these to learn more about Kuroinu's world and such.
Link to Vid:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dBl779nvDYs
This has however placed me in a Cross roads as with this new info it dose uproot alot of the established lore I made for Rebellion in the first place it boils down to Do I keep the Lore I already established, Add some of the new lore and characterization, or do we need to make it as faithful as possible while still putting a spin on it.
For those who do not wish to read it or TLDR heres the Cliff notes Version
*Origa is Extremely Prideful to a Fault, apparently all Dark Elves are known to be very prideful, and the Absolutely Hate Humans viewing them as lesser beings. Its basically Genetic
Im not going to be implementing this because if this was the case Origa and by extension Chloe would be not romanceable. If any changes were to be made, Origa and Chloe would be harder to Woo because of their Stuborn Pride, But I see them far more Pragmatic so they wont be stupid enough to look a gift horse in the mouth so to speak.
* Dark Elves and High Elves came from 2 Giants that fell from a Sky island according to a Mytho's. The Dark Elves were born in the Giants Skull while the High Elves were born from the Giantess Tear. And apon the bodies of said Giants the Contenent was formed.
Nice little Norse Mythology lore here.
* Dark Elves are a All Female Race and are Exclusively a All Female Race. They are Born in a Underground Cave called Nidvallir, They live Practically forever and are immune to Diseases and such. As such they rarely need to reproduce, The Cave Can not be Accessed by Mortals due to a barrier hence why Pure Blooded Dark Elves are very very Rare. Dark Elves Reproduce through a Ritual supposedly using the Ancient Giants Spunk this is how they keep their Blood lines pure. They View half-elves with the highest content and tend to cast them away before committing sepuku themselves as they view half-elves in their society as a curse.
While this dose have some interesting lore and such that I will more than likely implement regardless, I kinda liked more lore Regarding the Dark Elves a Tiny bit better, Regarding the Elf Wars and Why the people are Rare and such, as well as WHY There are no Male Dark Elves/ High Elves. Also the Lore about the half elves while interesting I feel detracts and hurts Chloe's Character and her Arc I had in mind.
* Origa Apparently Came to the Surface with the Black Citadel because she was next for the Ritual of Reproduction, The Monsters Gathered around her and began calling her Queen....Just because....and she never started the war at all the monsters were just leeching off her power. So in Actuality she was never Really a Queen they just called her that and she lost her power because the monsters were just using her.
This dosen't sit well and kinda uproots the entire Rebellion plot, Plus its kinda a plothole and doesn't explain the WHY's. If I were to use this it would only be a handful of ideas from it.
*Origa Dose not Hate Celestine and in fact respects her for her Empathy
Ok Guess I dont need to change that XD
*Origa was so Prideful and did not want to give Vult any Satisfaction that apparently with the last of her powers she committed Soul Suicide
While this DOSE Explain how she 'Broke' this was another 'For the Sake of the Plot' moment I felt. and also THIS SCENE MADE ME CRY! It dose however give more insight into Origa's Character BUT again this will make wooing her Difficult if not impossible.
*Vult is Apparently alot smarter and more intelligent then we give him credit and apparently knows alot about Dark Elves and is one of the few Soldiers who can Read, Also he has a habit of taking advantage of any situation to make a quick buck but all to pay for his army.
This give more insight in Vults character and paints him more as a actually intelligent villain rather than a brute that got lucky. I'll probably add this to give Vult some Depth
With that said Im going to leave it to you guys to Decide on what to do from here. What Cahnges should we do if at all or should we change it to make it 100% more Accurate
BTW Feel free to leave a comment on what you Personally would like to be Changed if any at all
Comments
I Actually found a Discord given to me by one of my DA Friends to the Nexton Discord Servers, and its in english, so I could ask them SOME Questions but they are a little picky on what info they are willing to disclose. I've been talking to Deadguy about this and Taking patreon votes, so far, into account we'll be making some minor lore changes, change Vult's character and motivations a bit, he's still a #$% hole though, And Tweek Origa and Chloe's Story slightly to fit better, but more or less 95% of Rebellions core stories and ideas are the same. Thanks for the Encouragement BTW, Its comments like these that keep me pushing further and harder >83
Lionheart Studios
2019-09-16 05:42:14 +0000 UTCI'll stick with what you have already over the'canon' material because yes it does add some color to what was missing. It still does not give me the why; whereas your story does that for me naturally. This is the first time I have ever seen this new information and though interesting, I rather go and stick with what you have in mind Seth. Stay encouraged man!
Stanley Seymour
2019-09-15 23:21:49 +0000 UTCI agree that always made no sense to me >_>;
Lionheart Studios
2019-09-15 04:33:42 +0000 UTCNever had much interest in the "One-Gender Race" stuff, especially when it's a race that's traditionally dual-gendered like Humans.
Vegeta002
2019-09-14 22:08:20 +0000 UTC