Unnamed Shiny/Dirk Comic: Script

So, as mentioned earlier, the winner for my next comic project was the Shiny/Dirk-havin-gross-father/son-sex epic! I'm thinking I'm going to do this one in a black and white with one color style similar to the Dirk recipe comic, just because it's going to be pretty long and I'd like to keep the amount of work I have to do reasonable.

Usually with these longer comic projects, I'll barf a script out without editing it much, then thumbnail the whole thing, refine the script based on the thumbs and then start actually sketching the thing out. So, I figured for this first week, I would show you all the barfed-up script I have for this comic so far! It's subject to a lot of change at this point in the process, but I wanted to show you all something, at least. Hopefully I can get thumbnails done by next week. If anyone has any good name suggestions for this comic, too, let me know.

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Skunkdad, pissed off at Skunkboy for sleeping with other dads, finally gets into an argument with him that leads to angry sex. Possibly with a friend over (Tony) sitting downstairs the whole time hearing them thumping around upstairs.

Sh: Well, your dad is kind of hot.

T: Haha, omg shut up!

Sh: What? He is!

Di: Pfff. Well some people will sleep with anybody’s dad, I guess.

*annoyed beat*

Sh: WOW, Dad! Enjoying your beer, huh??

Di: Oh, fuck off, like you can fuck all your friends’ dads and I won’t say anything-

Sh: EXCUSE me??

Di: Ohhhhh, now you’re gonna get all huffy again, weh weh wehhhh-

Sh: DAD, what the FUCK, my FRIEND is here-

T: Uh. Should I leave? I can go…

Sh: No, you know what? Dad, let’s talk about this upstairs. I’ll be right back.

Di: Pffff. Yeah. Sure, let’s talk about you hopping from dick to-

Sh: DAD! I’ll talk to you UPSTAIRS!

Sh: Okay, what the FUCK? You want to yell about who I’m fucking in front of my FRIENDS?

Di: Yeah, well, I just think maybe you shouldn’t fuck all of your friends dads-

Sh: I- I’m not- since when do you even CARE?

Di: What, you think you can just slut around all over the place and I’m not going give a shit?

Sh: Oh FUCK you! You NEVER gave a shit! You barely TALK to me! Now you want to call me a slut in front of Tony?

Di: You fucked Tony’s DAD!

Sh: I- well- you know… YEAH, WHAT ABOUT IT? I like hot older guys, is that a crime now?? I don’t understand why you even CARE about this!

Di: BECAUSE IT’S FUCKING GROSS! IT MAKES ME SICK TO THINK ABOUT YOU LIKE THAT! *throws beer*

Sh: *nervous beat* How fucking drunk are you?

Di: Oh, FUCK off. I have to drink just to wash the images of you and him out of my head.

Sh: Eugh! Dad! Why are you thinking-

*beat*

Sh: ...Are you jealous?

Di: ...What did you just-

Sh: Oh my god. You’re JEALOUS!

Di: Fuck you.

Sh: You can’t stop thinking about your son having sex with other guys’ dads! You’re jealous, you fucking dirty old man-

Di: SHUT UP!

Sh: Ha! Oh my god! What is WRONG with you?

Di: OH FUCK YOU! You filthy whore, don’t put this on me! I’ve seen you staring at me!

Sh: Staring??

Di: Every god damned day!

Sh: *blushing* Yeah, well, you’d stare too if your dad walked around half naked all the time, making everyone uncomfortable-

Di: Ha!! You DO stare! *starts getting closer*

Sh: Fuck off. Just because you’re a fucking pervert doesn’t mean we all are-

Di: No, fuck YOU! You’re the fucking pervert, stop denying it… *getting closer*

Sh: No. Get away from me-

Di: I see you looking when you think I don’t. I hear your bed creaking after we talk. *puts one arm against the wall, effectively pinning Shiny* I know you swiped my jock out of the laundry basket.

Sh: Dad…

Di: *Brings face in front of Shiny’s* You’re a dirty little pervert just like your old man.

Sh: *extended beat, breathing on each others’ faces*

*they kiss passionately*

Di: I fucking knew it, you slut.

Sh: F-fuck you. You don’t-

*Dirk physically pins Shiny against the wall now, rough but not violent*

Di: Fuck. You.

*They kiss again. Dirk puts his hand down Shiny’s shorts*

Di: Look at you. You’re so fucking hard.

Sh: D-Dad…

Di: Tell me you want me to fuck you.

Sh: *blushing, disgusted, cycling through emotions before he spits in Dirk’s face*

Di: *Surprised for a moment, then wipes it off and licks his fingers, smiling like a devil* Okay. We’ll do it your way, then, kid.

*Dirk tosses Shiny onto his bed. Shiny is shocked for a moment, then sees Dirk taking off his belt. His pants immediately start sagging, showing his dick bulging through his underwear.*

Sh: Wait-

*Dirk pins Shiny down on the bed facedown. He leans over Shiny, his face right in his son’s ear, whispering*

Di: You want to act like a little bitch? You want to pretend you don’t want this? You want me to get mad, to punish you? You got it, kid.

*Dirk pulls down Shiny’s shorts and underwear with some force, exposing his ass. Dirk runs his hand over it, cupping Shiny’s balls and feeling his erection*

Di: *still whispering* Pff. You really are a little freak.

*Shiny whimpers - he’s clearly into it but still won’t admit it*

Di: Here’s how we’re going to do this, kid. I can smack you on the ass with this belt three times. Or you can tell me right now that you want your dad to fuck that tight little ass.

*Dirk lets Shiny go, laying freely on the bed now with his ass still exposed. Shiny looks back, sees his dad standing back with the belt ready. His pants have fully fallen down, and his dick is leaking precum through his underwear*

*Shiny takes a beat to breathe, this is an emotional moment. Shiny leans back with his ass in the air.*

Sh: Why don’t you do both, Daddy?

*Cut to Tony sitting in the living room as three cracks are heard, followed by a lot of thumping*

T: I… probably should have left…

*Cut back to Shiny and Dirk, fully having raw sex in Shiny’s bed, Dirk’s fingers in Shiny’s mouth.*

Sh: F-fuck… Fuck me!!

Di: Yeah, that pussy is mine…

Sh: FUCK

Di: *leaning back in* Say it. Say it now.

Sh: ...S-say wh-

Di: SAY IT.

Sh: *takes a moment, looks Dirk in the eyes* I love you, Daddy.

*They kiss. After a couple of thrusts, Dirk comes inside of Shiny. He takes his dick out, and immediately puts a finger in Shiny’s ass, pulling some of the cum out, teasing it more while Shiny jerks off and comes, too.*

*Cut to a maybe 20 minutes later. Shiny and Dirk are cuddling in Shiny’s bed, kissing. Dirk has put oil on Shiny’s ass and is holding it. They look extremely satisfied.*

Di: I’m glad we talked.

*they kiss again*

*Cut back to Tony, still downstairs, taking pictures of their junk. They start as Shiny and Dirk, still in post coital bliss-out mode, come back down the stairs*

T: Oh! Uhhh. I guess you two w-worked it out, huh? Is… everything okay?

Sh: *A little embarrassed* Ha, uhh. Yeah! I… I think things are going to be okay… from now on.

*Dirk gently pats Shiny on the ass and he winces a little*

Di: Oop, sorry. Uh, yeah, Tony sorry to uh. Make it weird, there.

*Dirk goes to the kitchen to grab two more beers, one for him and one for Shiny*

T: Oh… um, it’s fine? I’m glad you guys worked it out. It sounded… uhhh intense!

*Dirk and Shiny look slightly mortified and then relax a little*

Sh: Yeah um. I’m. Glad you didn’t have to see that.

*Shiny takes a beer from Dirk*

Di: Well you know… he can see it next time! If you… want.

*Dirk clinks his beer with Shiny and grins for a beat*

Sh: Um… if he doesn’t mind, su-

T: I DO NOT MIND.

*beat, fin*