Working on the TWINE for Fertile in My Ex-Boyfriend's Dungeon #3 Today
Added 2019-07-10 16:27:38 +0000 UTCWorking on the next installment of Fertile in My Ex-Boyfriend's Dungeon. This time around Nellie and Beatrix will face off against a werewolf, a mimic, and a slime. This will undoubtedly be the biggest of the three yet as I fall into my bad habit of constantly making things more complicated and interactive than they need to be.
The schedule for this one is TWINE for July and writing for completion August 30th or so. As always, a caveat on that based on schedule and complexity, but feeling fairly good about it this far out.
Did you guys enjoy the addition of Nellie or did you prefer Beatrix solo? I received a really anti-Nellie review for book 2 on Amazon so I'm second guessing myself a tiny bit.
Comments
I think the addition of Nellie adds some variety to the encounters. I like such side characters in these stories in general. Otherwise it's just monster encounter (defeat, parley, or bad ending), then the next monster, and so on.
stoperArt
2019-07-11 15:44:59 +0000 UTCI like Nelly. I don't want everything to be a threesome, but the variety of Nelly being involved as an option or being the focus of a scene sometimes is nice. You are pry way ahead of this, but It could be cool if she and the main were competing sometimes as well as cooperating.
Grrrbah
2019-07-11 03:23:49 +0000 UTC
