ALYLM Chapter 8
Added 2025-12-31 19:31:54 +0000 UTCComments
I wonder if confessing has to be a love confession or just your feelings. Because while love confession means you can come back and do it again you can still confess how you feel about someone, in this case it is this: “She shouted again, eyes blazing with passion and a hint of anger. She could tell the crowd was ignoring her, or worse, mocking her, but that wasn’t enough to stop her. It was honestly admirable, putting yourself out there like that despite the world laughing at you.” …….. Also last time you mentioned that a reward was stated for Barbra when the prompt showed up, but nothing is showing now. Probably best to add it, or add it at the start of next chapter (for consistency). Hiding it doesn’t really achieve much since it will be shown after regardless, and I think having people look forward to the emotional part is more engaging that having it split on also wondering what the reward will be.
Zerak
2026-01-01 16:44:37 +0000 UTC
