JACG Chapter 48 ( Walk away)
Added 2024-03-22 02:57:04 +0000 UTCComments
There’s obsession turned to hat and then there’s this which is way worse then obsession turned to hate you have no idea how genuinely happy I was to see snow become better thanks to Ashley and his two years but doing what he’s doing to lily is far to cruel what’s happening to the muraders was deserved what’s happening to lily isn’t deserved it’s cruelty for cruelty sake
joshua foster
2024-03-22 14:41:23 +0000 UTCSorry for any mistakes, but English is not my first language. I'm loving your story so far, and in regards to the MC's hatred for Lily and his broken thoughts are valid. Only someone who was betrayed by someone they really love can understand this and Mc was at a completely extreme level of love (obsession).
Professor Pedro Boncompagni
2024-03-22 13:17:07 +0000 UTCReally trying to break lily is pointless it’s a waste of time and effort I thought he matured a little bit but now he’s acting like an abusive uncle what’s next him rapping lily or causing that to happen for no reason he should’ve moved on it was two years ago now she’s being tortured for no reason if this is an si welp turns out your joyfully abusive your family must be truly suffering your presence o don’t want him to be a beacon of good but torturing someone as innocent as lily makes him worst then potter please have your protagonist do better it’s almost been 50 chapters now this lily hate vendetta is drawn out for no reason You are glorifying abuse and that’s unacceptable I still do genuinely love your story but his behavior has been to cruel
joshua foster
2024-03-22 07:46:30 +0000 UTC
