"Dear Buttercup..." page 1 + PNG (Comic Book; MLB: Marinette, Cat Noir)
Added 2022-03-29 21:35:57 +0000 UTCHello, kittens! Yay, I made this page before the end of the month :) I really wanted to surprise you with something nice before March of this year is forever in the past
Also I was really excited about that scene with Buttercup that we saw in the last season XD I'm a Marichat fan and I was really looking forward to it :) But my hopes for another love line didn't come true. In that case, what's left for the fan to do?
That's right, get creative XD
This issue will have two pages in total. The second part awaits you next month. As you're used to, it's going to be even hotter!
I'm also carefully considering all the choices you gave me under the previous Madame Bustier comic :) There's a nuance here: I don't know English well enough to write long, funny conversations. Oh, I'm not too sure that my English is good on this page!
So I have to choose plots that are understandable without too many words :) Although my authorial ambitions demand more XD
Thank you for being with me, kitties! This Patreon is to me an oasis of light in a desert of darkness. But it wouldn't be so bright if it weren't for you!
With love and gratitude for your support, Tiana Lynx
P.S. I've also attached a PNG file, enjoy!
Comments
Found it!!! 😏
Tiana_Lynx
2022-04-01 09:06:56 +0000 UTCThe other TL is also on his belt, but in his first appearance
CallMeDale
2022-04-01 08:56:12 +0000 UTCOf course, I totally understand that desire to surprise the audience - it can be a powerful agent, hah! With what a wonderous creator you are, I'm sure you'll always have some around to catch any such mistakes should they happen. Again, great work!
Mobilia
2022-03-30 23:08:35 +0000 UTCI was suspicious of the clavicles and some of the wrinkles in her clothes
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 21:17:57 +0000 UTCThere is another one 🤪
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 21:11:33 +0000 UTCJust the one then?
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 20:37:34 +0000 UTCSniper accuracy! You found it! )))
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 19:52:27 +0000 UTCTL on Chat’s belt when she’s pulling the suit off
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 19:37:02 +0000 UTCStop, stop! Jugget will never cheat on his crocodile! Never XD
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 16:43:28 +0000 UTCI'm sure there are a lot of guys who would gladly help Marinette and be stand-ins for Adrien. Jagged, for one. "Marinette! How can I help my favorite album cover girl! Errr, you know what I mean." "Well, Jagged, there's this guy I like but I don't know how to talk to him about, you know, sex. But you've had a lot of groupies, so..." "I gotcha, Marinette! I can teach you all I know, and then you'll totally rock his world!" "Gosh, thanks, Jagged! Youre the best!" "Yeah, might as well give with the compliments now. You'll be too tired later." "What?" "Nothing."
Ars Gratia Artis
2022-03-30 16:24:34 +0000 UTCAlso imagine the reaction when she actually gets the courage to try this on her “Buttercup”
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 13:49:34 +0000 UTCAnd just a little bit from the chinchilla's eyes XD
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:47:00 +0000 UTCThat sounds like the perfect solution.
Jaxton Dragoon
2022-03-30 11:38:58 +0000 UTCMy dear kittens! I am so glad that you are willing to help me with the translation! I'm glad to hear it, as well as all the warm words you wrote to me :) However, I don't want to deprive you of the sense of novelty and tell you in advance what will happen in the comic. Because I would have to explain under each line what will happen in the drawing. Your imagination will have already created the drawing, and I'm afraid you'll lose your sense of novelty I realize that my Patrons are here to support me as well, but for the sense of novelty, too! And I, in turn, enjoy surprising you. So let's do this: I save the technical files of each drawing, and I can make edits to it. If after publishing you don't understand the plot / you see an unforgivable grammatical error / or the dialogue is composed "crookedly", then write me a private message! I'll make edits to the dialogue text, and I'll rewrite the picture file. That way you'll continue to enjoy the plot twists (XD) and you can help me with the translation! Love you very much! You're sweethearts :)
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:36:46 +0000 UTCGot that mix of doe eyed and moe moe eyed
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 11:35:20 +0000 UTC:-*
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:29:56 +0000 UTCI'm afraid that if Marinette applies this umbrella operation, Adrian will only suspect that Marinette is offended XD
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:29:10 +0000 UTCI was hesitant to draw these anime eyes, but now I see that I wasn't wrong :)))
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:27:55 +0000 UTCOh, don't doubt it! This story will teach Marinette to get her point across! :)
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:27:04 +0000 UTCI thought about it a lot, and wanted to ask for help with the translation :) But I was held back by the fact that this way I would have told the plot of the comic beforehand, and made the characters involved in the story known :) In short, I don't want you to lose the joy of novelty :) Your encouragement gave me a bright idea! In any case, I still have the technical drawing files. And if you see a crooked translation / or if you have any problems understanding the plot, you can write me about it in private messages. And I'll make edits to the text of the comic! That way I won't ruin the surprise for you, and if something goes wrong, I'll fix the text :)
Tiana_Lynx
2022-03-30 11:25:26 +0000 UTCAs if post reveal Adrien wouldn’t casually be saying “marry me” as often as or in place of “I love you” and continuing to ask long after the eventual honeymoon just because he sees her and his mind goes blank with love
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 11:10:56 +0000 UTCLove the shiny eyes at the end
CallMeDale
2022-03-30 03:32:04 +0000 UTCI second this. I'm sure most of us would be happy to help out with dialog.
Jaxton Dragoon
2022-03-30 02:20:45 +0000 UTCWhile seeing Marinette strip was awesome. I was partly hoping she'd rip her clothes off like Ms. Bustier. Looking forward to part two and hoping that she makes her intentions known in a way that will be hard to ignore.
Jaxton Dragoon
2022-03-30 02:19:11 +0000 UTCAnd here I thought the line about having '2 hamsters' was the tipoff as to Marinette's intent. MARRIAGE!!!! That's like a thousand bells going off at once, and sends a lot of guys scurrying for the hills! If Adrien really doesn't get the idea, Marinette should threaten to put Adrien's umbrella where the sun doesn't shine! He'd get it then.
Ars Gratia Artis
2022-03-30 00:14:36 +0000 UTCWowza! Another absolutely fantastic piece, a surprise - but a welcome one all the same. Love the way she strips down and comes onto him, it comes across as a fantastic mix of firm yet flirty. As for the dialogue, I don't see any issues with your English here - the point is clear and then some! Wonderful work as always. I'll also add, and I'm sure I'm not alone in this, that should you desire to go for something with longer and more ambitious dialogues yet aren't as certain of your abilities as you may like, we would gladly be able to help in some form or fashion - such as private messages to some or simple posts in the planning stages for all - through the process!
Mobilia
2022-03-29 23:48:23 +0000 UTCYour English is fine! There aren't any mistakes.
Ars Gratia Artis
2022-03-29 22:26:00 +0000 UTC
