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Diana's Diary - First page

You managed to sneak into Diana's drawer and take a picture of her private diary, just the first page, before you heard a noise from downstairs and had to make a discrete exit through the bedroom window...

What you found inside was quite intriguing. (The picture is inside Collections, Tier 2)

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Thank you for asking. I will vastly improve the prose, up the pacing, add new scenes, cut old ones, and fix many minor and major plot points, plus add some better illustrations. But in essence, it will largely be the same story as before. I first wrote WW more for myself, but then I realized it was becoming something bigger and decided to make a real attempt at a serious novel. Now it has the potential of remaining my main project for years to come.

Edgar Nightbird

Well, this is exciting, I look forward to reading the rewritten WW chapters. May I ask what you intend to improve or add that you found lacking before?

Dignatus CJMord


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