52 - Next round of feedback
Added 2023-11-19 20:52:46 +0000 UTCThanks to everyone sending me over your work.
I tried to be critical but constructive as well. I hope you like it. And sorry if I missed any more artists, this one is already 45min long. But this won't be my last feedback video.🌞
00-11min: https://www.instagram.com/dawnmotion_/
11-19min: https://www.instagram.com/holabate/
19-24min: https://www.instagram.com/yordan__stoyanov/
24-28min: https://www.instagram.com/arjunkumar.design/
28-35min: https://www.instagram.com/oscarcravalli/
35-39min: https://www.instagram.com/martin.smatana/
39-41min: https://www.instagram.com/denysnichele/
41-44min: Joaquin Cipriani
Comments
Hey Vincent, just got the time to say thank you! Your feedback was really positive for me, there's certainly some things I need to figure out about how to show my work in a better way. I appreaciate a lot the time you took for doing this for the community that follows you and your work.
Bate Bte
2023-12-12 23:13:29 +0000 UTCHey Vicent! Thank you so much for your feedback on my work; it was super helpful; It makes a lot of sense. I really appreciated it!
Denys Nichele
2023-12-04 23:10:20 +0000 UTCWow, what do you mean 6 months... your piece is amazing.. Congrats!
Yordan Stoyanov
2023-11-23 08:43:44 +0000 UTCHey Vincent and everyone! First of all, I want to say amazing work to everyone who sent their work for feedback. I personally think that it is really brave and an achievement of its own to send your personal work to be critiqued by someone. I just want to give a bit of clarity on my piece, because it turns out my email got lost and only the video file came through, lol. Vincent guessed it perfectly - the motion piece was for an Art Exhibition and the topic was "Organism". My piece is called "Anxiety" and it is inspired by my battle with it - every day, every morning, after every "trigger". Even making the motion design piece for the art exhibition was a fight with anxiety on its own. The shape is an abstract face (self-portrait) that is being deformed by the anxiety attacks. The music was a big challenge for me since i wanted to combine visuals and sound. So a huge shoutout to Jürgen Branz and his Soundpack for motion designers. Vincent, thank you for the feedback. Nobody around me managed to go that deep in the production feedback for my piece since very few people in my area are doing 3d and are impressed that the "thing" is even moving. When you started talking about adding some complexity to the white material it sounded so obvious. I know you said that you don't like luminescent materials and that it is a personal thing. Now I am asking myself why I enjoy them so much. Thank you, Yordan
Yordan Stoyanov
2023-11-23 08:36:39 +0000 UTCdammed that sucks. I hope you can still recover your account😉
Vincent Schwenk
2023-11-22 15:01:08 +0000 UTCHi Vincent! Thank you so much for your feedback! I started using Cinema 4D six months ago, so I'm really glad that you liked the video :) I'll review the color management and re-save the entire film since I rendered it in 32-bit PNGs. Thanks again, Lilla
Lilla Hajnal
2023-11-20 12:42:40 +0000 UTCHey Vincent, thank you so much for the feedback, really appreciate it! So about my instagram - it's a bit embarassing but I've simply been locked out of my old account haha. I used an encrypted password manager with two step verification and my old phone broke. I've contacted instagram about it but there's nothing they can do. The active one is the "aka.oscarcravalli", so not the one you have in the description, but this: https://www.instagram.com/aka.oscarcravalli/ :) About the motion blur - I looked in my file and I've forgot to turn deformation blur on! I did use a voronoi object that I made editable and baked as an alembic, maybe this causes problems too? And finally about the grade - now when I look at it I agree with you, it needs more contrast and it looks a bit brownish/yellow. I think the idea was to have a slightly warm and "soft" look to the image when I graded it. Also my monitor might be way off haha, haven't checked it in a while. Again, thank you so much for the feedback! :)
Oscar Cravalli
2023-11-20 11:34:43 +0000 UTC
