Lil big champ (Pg.5)
Added 2022-04-10 00:20:54 +0000 UTCA long while since I've made the last one, but here is going slow and steady, and there'll be a few tweaks on the dialogues (The bubbles designs and so old previous dialogues of page 4 too) some other changes as a proper script and maybe a bit of a more deep like story (not meaning there won't be feet and tickles) and a concrete work-flow that keeps consistent for the comic stethic and the amount of pages coming out!
Hope you enjoy it! ~
Comments
Thanks a lot dad! I want this to worth it! And make sure people enjoy it, gotta rethink and fix some dialogues to make this encounter between Haru and Fleur more natural and so other stuff, but the thesis is a killjoy!
ArtisticBurr
2022-04-10 16:25:44 +0000 UTCSimple, I will have to tweak many other things on patreon, so it will worth it to be here! the comics are exclusive here...but if I make it public there won't be any reason to be in patreon if you can just wait a week for it to come out... (not that I upload any other thi gs more interesti g here, I barely have time!) And dont missunderstand, I love my DA followers too, but Patreon needs to remain a bit more special since people here pays monthly! (Zack may does, but he dedicates fully on drawing [As far as I know he does] he can easily draw all day) I gotta shift between this, my career and personal life projects
ArtisticBurr
2022-04-10 15:18:48 +0000 UTCYou know, I think it would be a better idea to reupload these pieces over on Deviantart and Furaffinty a week after you upload it here. Zp92 is doing it, why are you aren't?
2022-04-10 14:11:37 +0000 UTCI love it Burr and love how the story is progress ^w^ !!! Seriously it have a lot of suspens now, more than a tickle-comic this become a real story with a goid scenario and monologs with characters !! Even the expressions give so lot of tension, thus face our hamster doo, we see all her worryness in her eyes and we share her worry....me too I don't want our little cutie Haru get hurted >×< !!!! I hope they'll can stop the fight or at least than luck will be on Haru's side and make her win without get hurted :(.... Now I realy want see the next , congrat Burr you have make this tickle-comic a suspens-manga !
Hake-Feretto
2022-04-10 06:57:31 +0000 UTC
