I actually started out with a full body, but I didn't like the way it looked, so I scrapped it and went with a portrait instead
Excaliblader
2021-06-09 16:37:24 +0000 UTC
Thanks for the critique! Yeah the texture is what I was really struggling with, I'm still not quite sure how to properly do that. If I had grouped some shadows together to create clear separations between the hair strands, I think that would've also helped. The top left part of the hair looks really good and I think I need to figure out how I did that
Excaliblader
2021-06-09 16:36:34 +0000 UTC
Would love to see a full body of this one😍
Jakekhaos7 .
2021-06-07 16:48:46 +0000 UTC
I just wanna say it looks great now but you said on Twitter you are not happy with the hair. I speak as someone who is not an artist so please ignore me if you want but could the shadowing on the hair be too dramatic? Beyond that the hair doesn't feel textured. Obviously I assume this is incredibly difficult to achieve as you cannot fall back on the anime style of just drawing outlines but I would say the outside of the hair looks fantastic with strands of hair coming off detailing the area and what not but the bulk hair looks a bit flat despite the shadows trying to generate depth