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That Day, Part 14 - Heartbroken (W.I.P)

Here's the latest chapter of my 'That Day' gay romance story. It's marked as a work in progress, as it's likely to undergo some rewriting in future.

It ended up being quite a difficult chapter to write, probably down to the subject matter, with the two main characters dealing with depression and heartbreak. It kind of brought up a lot of unpleasant memories. It also ended up being a lot longer than I was expecting.

Previous chapters can be found in my FA gallery and on my web site: cyberklaw.com

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Yes, my apologies about that. I attempted to upload a comic, but something kept going wrong and the post kept going up without the attachment for some reason. I tried a few times, but it had the same result, so I deleted the posts. I'm currently trying to figure out what the problem is and have even contacted patreon for help.

Cyberklaw

Hey something seems to go wrong. So far None of the Comic Posts leads to a page. Just wanted to inform you if you did not realize it already

Rei Loire

Well we all know that that smug asshole Marcus will love how he managed to Keep Harvey to himself and away from Oliver. Now he can get more concilliary sex from a heartbroken bear. And there I am totally hoping that he makes a wrong comment Spilling the info that he informed Oliver (would nicely fit with Harvey having put in the badgers number in his phone to suddenly Need it) And last comment on Justin. Really thought he would also like to run a wedge between their relationship, but after the phone call he is the perfect ex. He pointed out that there seems to be an ulterior Motive in Marcus arrival (perhaps because he himself would have done that to get back Oliver), but he made his badger friend look at it from a different side and with luck search a bit deeper About Facts to Harvey now

Rei Loire

That was rough to read, but that's how heartbreak goes. It was a great chapter, and I certainly agreed with Justin. I just feel like Marcus is driving a wedge between them, and I still want to know what Harvey is hiding, but I hope that the two of them are able to reconcile. But what Harvey did at the end has me worried. Great job! Looking forward to more! :)

Ryo Toya


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