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Added 2021-09-11 12:07:47 +0000 UTC
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I 100% second that. The Characters are incredible, all of them. And the writing is state of the Art. ❤
Niklas Nosber
2021-10-12 19:07:21 +0000 UTCThank you man for the awesome review! As for how this story ends, and that it needs a second season or even a third. Well, it's not that simple. I understand how you feel and there really is a lot more interesting plot to be made here, but I'm not sure if I can pull it off without falling flat, as you put it. I'm in my third year of writing this story, and I feel like if I keep doing it, the quality will suffer over time. Not only that, but I'm just getting tired of these characters, and I want to write something new. To apply the experience I gained in creating BARS to a new project that will be more ambitious, more thoughtful, and of higher quality. I'm pretty sure that the new game will be no worse than BARS, and potentially even better. In addition, it will have a very interesting setting. So it will be an amazing adventure.
MrJet
2021-09-20 20:15:07 +0000 UTCJust finished up to the current end.. I'm just one voice amongst many but PLEASE continue this story for some time to come.. Ive become so engrossed in the characters, fallen for the lovely lisa and for the 1st time since being a dik i'm so in love with a AVN series.. You TRULY have something worth your time here and from one writer to another, there is SO much story and future for this.. into a season 2 and beyond.. many avn's fall flat while this has maintained my interest all the way through with its pure beauty.. I've seen the evolution of your work through the entire playthrough and it has captivated me.. If it was some tale that could be rounded out with a few epilogues then i'd say fine but since this project feels like the beginning of an epic saga filled with Highs and lows.. and with the potentials out there for story in that business that i have yet to see anyone do it right till this.. Yes again many choose to do this via an epilogue but in this case i feel it wouldnt do the story justice given the time and dedication you have put in to build these characters and story.. to 'time skip' the next highlights of their lives when the telling of the story in another season for there time as a opening/support act for naked park to a season 3 where they become their own global success.. with all the pit falls explored from exhaustion to infidelity.. pain killer addictions, giving the player a choice to see these paths for the story or steering the mc and Velvet World through them to fame fortune and happiness.. Sorry long plea but I highly doubt that i'm the only voice wishing for this as much as a new IP can be great i've also seen many authors fall flat on this when they already had something worth expanding for the following audience that loves it so.. Your a rare talent mr jet.. stay true to your vision and lets see this masterpiece grow even further.. last of all.. Thankyou for bringing such an amazing piece of work to our screens
Crowangel Gaming
2021-09-19 16:20:48 +0000 UTCim currently at the part of the story where Emma the ex 1st arrives to the story.. i noticed a MASSIVE overhaul to the images and character at this point, am i right in assuming that it was around here that a newer rig or system was used as it seems so much better than the already great cgi work and art/animation
Crowangel Gaming
2021-09-18 17:41:32 +0000 UTCthank you!
MrJet
2021-09-12 13:19:56 +0000 UTCtwo excellent ladies
Michael LuPayne
2021-09-12 02:12:01 +0000 UTCYour Artwork is great ! Excellent work
Marc Couperot
2021-09-11 17:14:36 +0000 UTC
