Early Access 0.1533.0 - Doll Storyline Completion!
Added 2020-11-10 20:21:34 +0000 UTCHey, cakes~
First, apologies for another late update. That last one really took it out on me! Anyway, I resolved not to push this release out until I at least had the Doll storyline finally written to some sort of conclusion like I intended, so here it is!
And wow, what a journey. This one took about three months from start to end, and as usual there's a lot of stuff I think could stand to be improved. Not to mention I have made some creative choices that I'm not entirely sure about so with those things in mind, feedback from you lot would again be muchly appreciated! At the very least I hope you'll find what's here to be a fun ride :)
So what next? Probably tweaking the Doll storyline some, but besides that I'm not sure what I want to tackle next. I might have another crack at the Reversal story, or maybe something villainous; I haven't done something with those stories for a while... Speaking of which, check out the Villainous Devoted story for that new CG I teased last week~
Hope you enjoy the new release and I'll be back with another one in a couple of weeks ^^
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What's New
- Sayori's Doll storyline is now scripted and playable up to a conclusion!
- New CG for Villainous Devotion storyline
- Word count is now around 238,000
- Spanish localisation: Various edits and corrections to the existing script
- Updated the end credits with the latest backers
Known Issues
- Changing the language on a line where an animation occurs (like screen shake) will throw up an error.
- Spanish is not yet available for the latest content (Let me know if this affects you)
Comments
Sayori and Akiko's relationship could stand another mention or two, yeah. And of course I'd love to have some CGs depicting the catalepsy among other things. This route is a goldmine for CG's ^^
Angela DeMille
2020-11-12 09:09:34 +0000 UTCNice ending, although I agree that more could be added. One thing that I noticed was the mention of Sayori and Akiko have sort of drifted apart - while it's ultimately a minor plot thread, perhaps you could slip in a few more mentions of that in this path, in order to build it up more? I'd also love to see a CG of the full body catalepsy, although I'm sure you'll get to it when you get to it. :) Other than that, not much else to say - I'd love to see more of the Reversal path, I know that much! Anyway, great job, and keep up the good work!
Andrew
2020-11-11 22:09:47 +0000 UTCId love some more in the reversal story that is one of my favorite storylines!
John Doe
2020-11-10 20:27:54 +0000 UTC
