Early Access 0.1530.1 - Doll Storyline Continuation
Added 2020-10-04 16:14:56 +0000 UTCHeeey, cakes!
It's been another fortnight of toiling away at Sayori's Doll story. I really am sorry it's taking so long, but I think I finally have a semi-coherent outline written for a full version of the route, so I can get to writing the rest of the script.
I'm plenty worried about how the outlined story looks, though. Chiefly that some parts of it might be too similar to other storylines, and that the events that occur at the beginning don't properly support what happens in these later scenes. As ever, I'd be very interested to hear what you lot think if you decide to read the story I've sketched out here!
Artwise, there's a couple new CGs to talk about here. First there's Sayori's Alter route scene teased the other week. It came out even better than the initial sketches indicated and I'm extremely pleased with it ^^ The second I didn't write an article about because it's a fairly simple variant of a previous CG, but you can see it in Hiroko's second storyline and it works really well~
For next time I'm really hoping to get a lot more done on the Doll route script, although if I hit too much of a wall I'll try something else. Maybe revisit Reversal again? We'll see how I get on ^^;
For now though, I hope you find something to enjoy about this latest release and I'll be back soon with more updates!
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What's New
- New CG for Sayori's route, during her Alter storyline
- New CG for Hiroko's route, during her "Ticklish Hands" storyline
- Sayori's Doll storyline is now (very roughly) outlined to a conclusion
- Word count is now around 226,500
- Spanish localisation: Various edits and corrections to the existing script
- Updated the end credits with the latest backers
Known Issues
- Changing the language on a line where an animation occurs (like screen shake) will throw up an error.
Comments
Ooh, this outline sounds really cool! I look forward to seeing the full scenes! If you wouldn't mind my personal opinion, I'd rather see a show with Sayori than switching to Nozomi, since this is her route and all. Still, you do whatever you think works best!
Andrew
2020-10-05 03:36:38 +0000 UTC
