Early Access Release 0.1517 - Nozomi Rewrite Conclusion?

Well, here it is! It's been at least two months of toil but I've FINALLY written a version of Nozomi's reworked route through to a semblance of a conclusion. I'm far from happy with the current version, especially as I've had to scale back my ambitions for it just to get it done, but for now I'm just gonna have to step back and work on another part of the game before I get completely fatigued.

At the very least though, I do think even in this state it's an overall improvement over the original writing. The first weekend's new scenes alone set it apart by giving Nozomi a chance to shine as a character that she didn't really have before. Not to mention I think the whole thing reads a fair bit sexier than before while still maintaining a comfortable distance from anything X-rated~

Anyway, I hope you folks enjoy what there is of the reworked version, such as it is! Naturally I'd love to hear any feedback, especially if there's anything in the writing that doesn't seem to make any sense (mashing two separately-written stories together may do that...) I only wish there was more to show this time, especially after how little got done last fortnight. But  think I'm just going to have to accept that this was just a slow month overall. 

Even my artist seems to have been affected, as he's only been able to complete one work so far this month, which was to complete the Delusion route CG from last time with a variant for Hiroko. More art is incoming, and I had hoped to have it ready in time for this update, especially as it's been requested by a few fans, but it wasn't to be. 

So that's all for now. I may do a bonus release later this week if there's some art ready to show by then, as well as tease the next parts of story I'm thinking to work on for next time, but no promises. We'll see ^^;

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What's New

• Completed Nozomi's reworked route to a single playable path from start to end
• Added Hiroko's version of the Delusion route scene CG on day 6 
• Started work on an outline for a Kyou redemption arc, during the Villainous Devoted path (there's barely anything written, though)
• Word count is now over 185,000
• Usual miscellaneous spelling and grammatical corrections