Digital Faggot Suicide Heaven — A Short Story
Added 2023-01-21 16:30:00 +0000 UTCHi babes I wrote a short story over the past couple of days and decided to post it on here. Content warnings for queerphobia and suicide (obviously), along with body horror associated with cybernetics, unreality, and extremely gross weird sex (I mean it!). It's about a trans girl who tries (and fails) to kill herself by algorithmic apotheosis. If you like it, please let me know! I'm trying to write more fiction. This is still the very first draft, which means no one besides my boyfriend has edited it so please be normal about any weird flaws. But thanks for reading!
Comments
Superb writing. And I don't say or think that often. Read it last night before going to bed, which was probably not a good idea, given the content warning. This morning, I reread and, being a scifi nut, really, really appreciated the cyber/body horror aspects of the story, which strike me as a very believable tech/hardware progression, given our (U.S.) culture surrounding porn and instant gratification.
M. A. Provencher
2023-01-24 19:12:24 +0000 UTCJay this is SO good.
Jo
2023-01-23 04:06:20 +0000 UTCYou show off a lot of your strengths as a writer in the descriptions of traggotry, here. It comes from a place of pain, love, and personal experience that really come through in the descriptions of sex in particular.
Victor
2023-01-21 20:47:25 +0000 UTCMy gods, this is heavy - and I mean that as a compliment. I wasn't sure I should read this before I actually did, as a queer troubled by suicide myself, but I'm glad I did. I think I finally know what catharsis means. Thank you, Jay. I mean it from the bottom of my heart.
Xan Farley
2023-01-21 17:22:45 +0000 UTC
