Becoming Pigs Yeah Yeah (English Cover)【Trickle】「豚になってyeah yeah」

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Lyrics:
Tip Top Tip Top,
Take all the pride you worship
Kick Out Kick Out,
All that because it's stupid
It's Time It's Time,
Can not keep myself so quiet
Chuck Out Chuck Out,
Throw it all away, just lose it

Ahh,
I'm really sick of these fools who think they're higher than Hell
Ahh,
I'm really sick of these fools who are never gonna shut up over themselves

Together now,
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Becoming Pigs of society
Go wild,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Lose your mind rolling in a trash heap
Let out a
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Tear off your clothes, Drop Dead and drink
Go burn in
Yeah, yeah, yeah
I wanna tear off that face you make

Don't stop, keep moving
Come on and throw away your life with me
Inside, Outside, I'll never give what they wanna take from me

Come! Forget about the morally sound,
The smartest thing to do is to throw it all out
Jackknife in hand, we'll scoop out all the guts
Of the life you built to hide your rotten inside

Hey, you know it's easy to see you think you're better than me
Hey, you know it's easy to see how pathetic you are to judge everybody

Together now,
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Becoming Pigs of society
Go wild,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Lose your mind rolling in a trash heap
Let out a
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Tear off your clothes, Drop Dead and drink
Go burn in
Yeah, yeah, yeah
I wanna tear off that face you make

You know, I'm wondering if
All the excuses you give
Will ever justify the worthless life you're livin'
Nobody cares about a thing you do, they're fed up with all your crap and sick of that song and dance from you
Uh-oh, what kind of good is that? You gonna run off and cry to your mom and dad?
I've got a better idea! How bout you kick it back and come relax right here?

Let's get twisted, let's get twisted...

Together now,
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Becoming Pigs of society
Go wild,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Lose your mind rolling in a trash heap
Let out a
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Tear off your clothes, Drop Dead and drink
Go burn in
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Screw off, oh yeah, yeah, yeah
Keep getting soggy then tossed aside