A Journey Through Iona Pages 5-6
Added 2024-02-20 13:00:03 +0000 UTCAnd so the actual vore parts begins. And yet we're already close to ending this mini chapter too.
Comments
Thanks so much Kibate! I am looking forward to the next pages. :)
Scott Miller
2024-02-24 20:22:49 +0000 UTCAh, thanks for the correction. I guess I wanted to do "What are you doing here alone?" at first and then changed it into "Why are you talking to yourself?" and mixed it together. It's fixed now.
Kibate
2024-02-23 15:09:22 +0000 UTCThis looks beautiful Kibate! I agree that the cartoon dot eyes for the shock expression is a nice touch as I love how expressive you have drawn Iona. A nice detail I really like is that of the throat and how the color hue changes from the mouth to the entrance of the esophagus. One little nitpick I noticed was that when the pink-haired fairy first talked to Iona on page five I think she should say ‘why’ instead of ‘what’ inside the first speech bubble.
Scott Miller
2024-02-21 23:39:28 +0000 UTCThis is awesome <3
MadameMaeve
2024-02-20 13:24:30 +0000 UTC
