Mimic Art Revision Teaser

Sorry this is so late, Thresh. I got really stuck on the comments about feminizing the arms but the comments about her being pasted on top and pushing the boundaries of being a monster-girl ring true to me. There are so many great things about this new art but I think if you're going to invest money in this you should request a redo IMO. She's looking more and more like a succubus who happened along and took a seat. Everything seems detached to me now.

Tribe

Damn, this looks like a massive upgrade over the previous one! I assume the final version will have more shading to give it more depth, and once that is done I can't think of anything else I'd want changed about the new design. This looks seriously fantastic well done, Otani!

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This is a case where the original artwork is more faithful to the idea of what a mimic is. The revision is just a succubus sitting on a chest.

Prefer Plasmid by a longshit. The other drawing looks very flat and thus unappealing.

Genickzwirbler

The things I see here for the games development are worth the 5 bucks a month I hope to see a new version asap and good luck with the development.

Sylas Martin

I liked the look of her buttcheeks squishing on the chest

SalamandarDirect

I think the revision is an improvement. The original was nice and i especially liked how powerful it looked with those huge arms coming out of the chest. Adding accessories and jewelry to the revision was a good idea. Being a chest mimic and not having some kind of riches or trinkets felt lacking and the revision does a better job of making it feel like it's a treasure chest mimic and not just a standard chest. On a personal level the hair in the revision is just so cute I love it bunches.

Abragail

Concur with this. Overall definitely prefer the newer art, but she looks separate from the treasure chest so I think there's an opportunity to make it better

TGR

I like the look of the girl, but she kind of looks pasted on top of the mimic drawing. I'd love to see a little more interaction between her and the treasure chest behind her.

ilikefour

Awww, I really liked the frizzy hair...

ghasT_T

It's safe to assume the only thing getting redone is the art, yes? If that's the case, I like the change in the arms and how they can catch your eye with the sparkly bits (I'd take away a few of the twinkles, but not a lot) and how they draw my eye. The old arms were almost invisible to me. I have no real stake on if the arms are feminine or not. For the body in the middle, I have to ask, why fishnets? I know that they can be appealing, but I don't think they go with the reworked theme. I'd put non-dangling golden ornaments at her wrists, ankles and hips with a small, decadent headdress to keep the treasure trap thing going. And since she has a long tongue and some have been hurting for more monstrous monster girls, you could give her a veil over her mouth and have the tongue loll out the bottom when she does the monstrous kiss. Maybe take off the veil during the loss scene?

Goruru

I think a stronger outline on the new art would help, as the coloration of the arms blends together a bit and makes your eyes work more on the details. I'm perhaps neutral, as I like matching expression for dialogue but also appreciated the older art as well. I'm sure it would be a whole ordeal to have it as an option (Like Fenoxo does) so that's not really viable. Thanks for the update as always! I've never commented on one of yours before so I should pass along that your writing and worldbuilding are truly fun. Cheers!

Rylon

I really like the new art better. The body of the mimic where the worst for me, so it is not so bad still I prefer to avoid her.

Konstantinus