Opinions Needed
Added 2024-12-21 21:24:09 +0000 UTCHow are you guys liking the story so far? You guys read the 30+ advance chapters so I just need your thoughts on the story—anything that needs to be improved upon, anything I can work on. I appreciate it if you guys respond. The last chapter on Webnovel didn't do as well as I expected, with people saying the quality is going down.
Thank you
Comments
Own stuff in which makes it better.
xLucqs
2024-12-21 23:30:15 +0000 UTCReally enjoying the story so far, I like it in particular because it is quite fast-paced, doesn't spend 400 chapters in the youth leagues playing against no names. Chapter 40 and he's already world class at the World Cup. Story is good, you seem to have removed the bad stuff and added your
xLucqs
2024-12-21 23:29:43 +0000 UTCDon’t worry about the web novel comments, just a bit slow paced and they are whining. Your chapter are pretty solid till now. Although maybe you can experiment a bit with the off pitch life.
Swordimmortal
2024-12-21 23:02:19 +0000 UTCthere will be more slife of life and romance coming up after the World Cup once he's in the world cup, however those chapters will be original and mine as the chinese author doesn't really focus on that but he's in a relationship with Barbara Palvin
noname_marco
2024-12-21 21:42:47 +0000 UTCA mí me ha gustado mucho, es interesante toda la etapa del mundial, solo me gustaría algo más de slice of life o romance pero no me quejo
B3T4
2024-12-21 21:27:34 +0000 UTC
