First day of school Alana
Added 2021-11-14 11:05:36 +0000 UTCBecause she needs a snazzy new outfit.
Art by filthycasualart
Comments
The outfit looks good. From the description i tought the skirt would be shorter. It looks like a bit under the knee rather then over it. Or maybe her legs are far too long for her build. Still good outfit. But the eyes. As many have said are kinda strange. I think the author tried the typical anime eyes but failed. It does remind me of those retro anime styles. https://www.pinterest.com/pin/423760646192991274/ Compared to modern anime drawing style https://www.pinterest.com/pin/625789310713731495/ https://www.pinterest.com/pin/705657835365636722/ https://bakabuzz.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/02/violet-600x338.jpeg Or even high definition works https://www.artstation.com/artwork/EVBbRA Mind you there is no one dedicated style that is right but compared to the 90s, the modern one looks more refined. It could also have to do the the hair over her left eye. Hold your hand half over one of your eyes and imagine trying to go on your daily life like that. To keep it short it looks off. Still im giving you my thanks for the picture. Was this an official artwork you payed for or just fan work? You have to make sure to note the difference. If you post artwork and dont say its fan work, people will think its your official art work and think that this is how you, the Author thinks character X looks like. While Fan fiction can look like anything without restrained, Official Art work has to look like what you as Author think is right. Do not let the readers decide this for you. Try different Artists until you find one that fits you just right. If the Relationship between Author and Editor is like a married couple, then the relationship between Author and Artist is like very good friends. Most Authors eventually end up with a single Artist they stick to with all the works they do. Not just for Characters but also for covers etc. So go wild but tell us whats going on. Its a bit selfish of me but i always loved the Art poll Pirateaba from The Wandering Inn makes on official art work. Would be really cool to get that here. And lastly i give the artist here some slack. Faces and eyes are very hard to draw. In a documentary i watched a couple weeks ago famous artists all sayed the same. Nearly all of them had a problem with 1 part of the body. Some cant draw hands, other feets, some have problems with the nose or the chest. And some have problems with faces. Most draw what they are good at and let another artist friend of theirs draw the part out they are bad at. Or alternative hide the part you are bad at. There was an artist that wrote in his diary that he could for the love of god not draw feet. So on every drawing the feet where hidden. Some in water, others behind an object etc. Not something one can do with faces unless you use masks. The Hands on this drawing need some work. The fingers to be precise. while they look good at first glace, looking at them closely, shows that they are strange. Some are too thin, others too thick. Still the rest of the body looks good. This is mostly a problem on the right hand (from Her perspective so our left) Just for clarification: This is meant to be constructive feedback and i am not attacking the author or the artist in anyway. If it looks like i did, then i apologize in advance.
Bookman
2021-11-15 19:14:20 +0000 UTCOutfit looks good, eye make her look like a frog
Jachin Nelson
2021-11-14 22:56:14 +0000 UTCsnazzy!
angie bell
2021-11-14 15:43:52 +0000 UTCNice outfit. I wasn't looking at it too hard but yeah the eye thing is a whoops for sure.
Some BS Deity
2021-11-14 13:47:52 +0000 UTCQuick consultation with artist for a fix.
Wandering Agent
2021-11-14 12:48:54 +0000 UTCYup, no problem with most everything else but the eyes disturb me.
Robert Mullins
2021-11-14 12:44:48 +0000 UTCuhhh... I value honesty when critiquing art . ln my opinion she looks straight wack. The only constructive criticism I can give is but isn't a technical explanation is please fix the eyes.
Maury
2021-11-14 12:18:24 +0000 UTCIt looks cool but the eye op top of the hair bothers me
Kitty Chan
2021-11-14 11:51:38 +0000 UTCVery nice! The hair/ eyes effect is a bit odd, but it's a cool look
Mike G.
2021-11-14 11:37:33 +0000 UTC
