scene 22 - wip (and fanta rants a little bit?)

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but that's a bit much... I didn't have any issue with the cut off point. I thought it was a very appropiate choice storywise. The thought of rape didn't even register as a remote possibility...

Agree with the comments as well. They've managed to put it in words better than I ever could. You're wonderful~ Love you and Ghost Lights <3

Ayamabuki

i'm so glad to hear this, thank you!! i'm also thankful for critique when i'm doing something wrong, or if you feel it is out of line. it means a lot to me as a creator and also just as a person since this story has a lot of my own experiences in it ;; i'm relieved i can show Noah's perspective on the kiss, too... it's a supernatural lovestory, too, which people seem to forget sometimes ajdfh. but i've really learned from this mistake. which was, i cut the scenes on the wrong page, or shouldn't have split the scenes at all. edit: whoops i clicked too fast. anyway, i hope the next update will clear everything up and i'm so thankful for your support <33

What?! Robin isn't a rapist at all! Ok, I could see from a worried outsider's perspective that yeah that wasn't the way to do it but calling it rape is not ok. It was such a light kiss too, its not like hes forcing himself on him holding him down and all. And he, himself felt guilty about it, most rapist never feel guilty. And like a everyone else here thinks, the way you present their relationship and the stories overall flow shows how much love they have for each other. I'm the type of person who's not ok with rape in any story, be it Yaoi, Yuri, or anything else. So at least in my opinion, this was no where close to rape, it merely was a guy with overflowing affection for another guy who couldn't hold back ONE kiss. Just keep doing you boo boo and don't mind it. We are all here as your fans and we will point out if something is actually off but when it come's down to it its your choice and we either choose to continue reading or not. (But if you need to know, I'll still be your fan)

Seconding the other comments. I can understand that the kiss while sleeping might rub people the wrong way, but in context of the whole scene and their overall relationship, it really isn't an issue. Keep going just like you are and try not to mind people who are exaggerating unnecessarily.♡

Let's Kei

I have no idea how anyone could think that about Robin, but honestly, when you read alot of Yaoi... it comes up often and I am sure that's where peoples mind are that would say that.. Kissing someone in their sleep is affection and love.. that's the way I see it.. in Yaoi land tho, it mostly means lust... haha But this is a lovely BL story that is clearly not about those two hurting each other... they will have other things in their way clearly.

Wcbchc

i'm relieved to hear that! yes it's probably because it has been often done before with a weird outcome, and i made the mistake to cut the scene at this point but i think if the scenes weren't interrupted but read at once it would be even clearer that he's never go into this direction. i'm gonna ask people to read the last few scenes again when they're all out ;; but for now i'm gonna say thank you so much for your words <3

People are weird and twisted to think such things. Your work is exquisite. Please go on!!!

People might be caucious when someone gets kissed in their sleep without aproval, but a situation between people who are close gives so much more information. In my eyes and feeling your storytelling, pace and beauty of how tenderly he aproached him made it so clear, that this just is what is between them, closeness and tenderness, and that there was no need for fear of mistreatment nor sexual harassment and not to mention rape.

How on Earth could anyone think that of Robin?!? 😡 Especially with Noah?? That was nowhere even on the radar... I love the story the way you’re telling it. The others will figure it out soon enough. And all the hints...omg I can’t wait!! 💜

Prophe100

I remember seeing this on twitter and I was SO confused as to why someone would think Robin would do that to Noah, but people really do jump the shark over nearly anything these days. Just keep doing you, though, the story is moving perfectly at it's current pace and I'm always excited to see another update ❤

Ash

As I mention on twitter before, don't listen to such idiots! ❤ BUT YOU WILL PRINT GL??? FOR REAL??? Oh my god!!!! >//∆//< Gimmeeeeeeeee~~~~ *v*

Here for you!!! I know you’d never do that to your characters... You relationships feel natural and new, growing like they actually are instead of fast, sudden realizations. They (and you) are my favorite! So please know that so so many of us are behind you 100%! (And I can’t wait for PRINTTTT!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😘)

toblerone231

I would rather wait patiently for a sweet romance to brew than have the author feel rushed just to get the sex juices flowing to please the audience. Take your time, this story is amazing, the art is beautiful, I love the boys.

Amber Newton