Update / Changelog / Weekly Schedule
Added 2025-07-19 16:41:51 +0000 UTCDear Patrons,
I have changed a few things for Hail Thy Gods and Respec On Death during the sweeping edit process. When they are fully edited, I will post a single file if you want to go back and reread it.
Changes for Respec On Death:
Made the intelligence debuff more obvious and questioned by Jimmy at a few moments in the story, as well as being mentioned by Mira in their first encounter. Also during the initial Respec process it is in one of the Red text boxes.
Changed the "Deviant" title / roll to be from a purple system admin and not Red.
Instead of deviants it has been changed to be Marauders. Which means the roll that Red gave Jimmy is now called Marauder. I think it plays better, and makes more sense in the long run, given that their goals are to help conquer worlds not defend them.
Adjusted his tone slightly in earlier chapters, made him less whiny.
Changes for Hail Thy Gods:
Slagging, Fracking etc will be replaced with their original intended swear words. Kuwathi swear words will stay the same though.
There may be some more minor changes in the future once it has been edited by my publisher, if there are any of note, I will let you know.
Weekly Schedule:
Monday: ROD
Tuesday: HTG
Wednesday: ROD
Thursday: HTG
Friday: ROD
Saturday: HTG
Sunday: Editing book one HTG.
Thank you, have a great weekend!
Respectfully,
Godric
Comments
I dunno about "Marauder" since that is just a raider, which can be said about many gate activity's. Any "gate kill quest" or "loot quest" is essentially what a "Marauder" does. So shouldn't it be more like: "Renegade" or "Betrayer"? Or if it's a "counter to gods" you could even go with "Apostate". Also Jimmy being booth "Apostate" & "Goddes Champion", would enhance the opposite of each. Though I suppose it would make "red's" role seem more like "satan", then "god". Anyway in RPG or MMORPG the player often goes as "adventurer" or "hero" into a dungeon for "loot". But it doesn't really matter if the "dungeon" is "evil" or "good" the "hero" is either way just a raider pillaging and looting the place.
Peter Adams
2025-07-19 17:10:51 +0000 UTC❤️🙏❤️
Michael O'Connor
2025-07-19 16:52:13 +0000 UTCIt’s has been great watching it develop
JustJynxy
2025-07-19 16:49:22 +0000 UTC
