A Rewrite.
Added 2025-11-25 16:21:56 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I've spent a majority of today rewriting this part of HiveMind(ed) and have started production on another one shot short (a dungeon trap inspired by Aries work).
I realised that I began waffling a bit at where we are in HiveMind(ed) and have decided to stop it/ nip it in the bud before the pacing completely gets away from me. So, instead of several pages of exposition this week I'm trying to cut it down to as few as possible so we can get on with the main 'plot'. Yes, that 'plot'. Feminization and TF 'plot'.
I don't think I'll get a page out today, but I'll make up for any missed uploads a bit later in the week.
Thanks for the feedback on the prior page, I'm trying to utilise it to create a stronger brand that'll produce higher quality content for y'all.
Comments
Thanks Six, that's some sage advice. Have you ever considered soliciting yourself as a voice of reason? You'd make a killing, haha.
MassManic
2025-11-26 19:46:03 +0000 UTCIt's a complicated push and pull So it may be justified, it may not. Others aren't close enough to the core of the work to judge Tell your story, Mass, how ultimately you want to tell it. Learn and adjust but don't let go of what makes you excited about it enough to do all this work
6six6
2025-11-25 19:04:31 +0000 UTCWe're here for anything you do, but don't overexert yourself, as long as it speaks to you it'll surely speak to us too, we trust your judgment. Something about feedback is that people who are unsatisfied have something to say, while people who love how things are going don't. Comments will tend to be biased in that way. But you're getting many hearts on your pages so you're definitely not way off base. Anyway, best of luck, I'm here for it!
Urgil Bougie
2025-11-25 17:06:30 +0000 UTC
