Master of One - Chapter 11
Added 2024-12-21 16:13:13 +0000 UTCI may wind up needing to re-write Talo's portion of this pretty heavily. It's a little info-dump-y right now, but at the same time, there's a ton of stuff going on in the world that Logan - which may not wind up being the final name of our MC, but I like it better than Daniel - needs to know. The information that's interesting to someone who is actively living in a world isn't always the same information that's interesting to someone who is reading about the world, but all of what Talo is saying is going to be relevant to the story eventually.
Some of it won't come up for a while, though, so as the story continues to develop, I may take bits and pieces of his intro out, and re-introduce them in flashback form later, just to space out the info-dump so a reader doesn't have to absorb it all at once.
