Master of One - Chapters 7 and 8
Added 2024-12-14 15:16:10 +0000 UTCI'm trying something new this time around - some of the chapters and sections are going to follow other characters. I don't think I could do that for Augur - most of the characters viewpoints are more alien, so Sara or maybe Zarina would be the only other characters to follow around Jack - but the characters in MoO are just people. Different species and with weird magical abilities, but just people.
Chapter 8 is the first one from Tif's perspective, and I think it shows some good promise for having the viewpoint of other characters working to tell the story and enhance the narrative and worldbuilding.