Master of One
Added 2024-10-04 02:37:15 +0000 UTCI started doing a re-write of the first few chapters.
I like a lot of the worldbuilding that I have going for the world, but the tone of the protagonist didn't quite feel right.
Most of the action is the same, but I did make a handful of changes to the fights.
The more substantial change is the addition of a more solid introduction to the world including some absolute knowledge in the prologue to make sure the idea is clear.
I also added a Borderlands-style intro to some of the fights. I'm not 100% sure that's going to make it through to the final version, but it felt fun so I'm leaning a little bit towards leaving it in.
I'm attending a Sci-Fi/Fantasy convention this weekend that has a lot of interesting panels talking about writing - I doubt I'll get much actual writing done, but if any of the panels spark any interesting thoughts, I'll try to make a blog post about how they'll likely impact any ongoing works.
