Magic Notebook Chapter 6 - First Draft
Added 2024-08-30 02:57:59 +0000 UTCOk - Next chapter is going to get into some of the history and rules that were revealed in the early revisions of the Chapter 6 draft, but this chapter turned into one more focused on bringing Sophia's role in the story forward and letting her establish a firmer relationship with Dan. It felt pretty necessary, and also lays the groundwork for some additional theories that will be coming up about how Sophia believes the Nootbook operates and what it reveals.
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Also noticed FF starts the chapter with shorts ends with a skirt
John Henry
2024-09-02 02:10:41 +0000 UTCIn my head, that's more because strawberry blonde is a reddish blonde and it's fair to describe it as either red or blonde at any given moment, but if it seems confusing I can go back - I try to mix things up to avoid becoming repetitive but not at the cost of clarity.
Winston Tarbox
2024-08-30 12:49:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
John Henry
2024-08-30 12:14:12 +0000 UTCGlad to see the way you took it. S's hair color seemed to change throughout
John Henry
2024-08-30 12:13:31 +0000 UTC
