Augur Book 2, Chapter 16, first draft
Added 2024-06-24 17:54:11 +0000 UTCI probably re-wrote more of this chapter than any other, and I'm still not convinced that this is it's 'final form'. Finding the balance between spending enough time on Tzila to showcase her character (and her particular kinks and perversions) and the non-Tzila related activities has been a challenge, but I think it's paying off. Chapter 17 is hopefully going to be easier to write, since what I have planned is effectively two payoffs back to back. I'm looking forward to it, especially because one of the scenes has been living in my head since I first started laying out the plot for book 2.
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Looking forward to it!
Jackson Bates
2024-06-24 21:05:25 +0000 UTCI'd guess it'll take a week or so to write the next chapter. It is going to include Tzila's full submission and her introduction to her new life, but also the full introduction to Jack's new house. The latter is the scene I've had in mind - it's a long overdue lingerie party that's going to feature at least one returning character. Looking at what I still have planned for the book, it'll need a relatively lengthy epilogue - probably with 3-4 short scenes stitched together to make sure I set things up for the future. That'll be chapter 18 (and maybe 19, depending on how long those 'short' scenes wind up being).
Winston Tarbox
2024-06-24 21:00:36 +0000 UTCI’ve been refreshing my patron endlessly this weekend for this chapter! Greatly looking forward to the next. Do you think you’ll have it out in a week or so? And is that scene you’ve had in mind the Tzila scene? I’m greatly looking forward to her submission.
Jackson Bates
2024-06-24 19:58:52 +0000 UTC
