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Play Through Script - Meet Yuki & Nega

The draft script of your first encounter with Mistress Yuki-Ona and her nemesis, Mistress Nega-Yuki, is finished!

In this introduction, you get an orientation to the rules of the House and exposed to the dynamic between Yuki and Nega. Get tempted with a little groping and find out how punishments and rewards work in the game.

If you're interested in playing through the web version of the script and giving us feedback, click here!

Patrons get access to the script before we invite anyone else to give feedback.

But if you don't want to spoil the full experience, then keep being a patient little fan until we get the Voice and Models in the game!

Play Through Script - Meet Yuki & Nega

Comments

This is great feedback! Thanks. Another Patron has said the same thing, so I'm definitely putting some thought into making this work differently. Nega-Yuki is going to be a fan favorite, I think ;) - Devilish Domina

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I read through the Yuki test script. Overall, I really like it! I read through it two times - the first being cooperative and the second being very uncooperative. My one point of feedback is that the choices you make don't have any consequences. You can be completely rude and not end up in any hot water, which seems wrong to me, and breaks immersion a bit. If nothing "bad" (let's be real, we all know we want the "bad" things XD) will happen, there's no incentive to behave, and no sense of risk if you want to be a little bratty. In my opinion, that can be addressed really simply by having Yuki give you demerits each time you don't pay attention to her, or rudely tell her you aren't interested in what she's saying. Other than that, it's great! I love the new characters! I'm pretty sure I'm going to be on team Nega-Yuki because I'm a glutton for punishment. XD Keep it up!

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