well rats eyes are all black, and i do sort of have keep the fonts the same for continuity, but thanks for the feedback
Krazyivan
2019-10-03 23:00:31 +0000 UTC
I must say that the last panel was more expressive in the "lines" version:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/page-11-lines-30324237
Here, the iris (almost looking like a black sclera) makes the pupil all but invisible, which greatly detracts from her look of confusion, fear, and slowly fading intelligence.
Also the handdrawn glyphs saying "enjoying yourself" looked WAY better.