Noticing 3: Subject to Change
Added 2018-08-08 23:42:00 +0000 UTCNoticing 3: Subject to change
A slow TF story by
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here's looking forward to the next part!
ButterDoe
2018-09-12 01:56:41 +0000 UTCyou capture so many little fleeting moments, like how her neck was changing for 4 legged running, the way she sees, smells and hears the world. Like blood. The speech and thoughts, to be honest are unsettling. In the best way possible. It’s really scary how we can see into her mind and the way it creeps ever closer to inhuman. I love it! Your breaking down the wall between animal and person on a level I couldn’t dream of experiencing before! That analyzing thought bubble. It means a lot to us, we’ve seen how it’s been taken from her, turned into a bit of unknown data, like a corrupted hard drive. You know, most TF stuff is simply a fetishist escape. I’m not saying that detracts from the artistic value, however I can see something in this story that any reader could appreciate. Someone coming from a different background that just likes horror stories and mind twisters would love this. That glass blood sample scene gave me chills
ButterDoe
2018-08-10 22:14:29 +0000 UTCKeep up the good story. I love the slow change to Feral. It is well done in this story.
Neon Kitsune
2018-08-09 06:07:55 +0000 UTCI've learnt that the format I've been updating he story in wasn't necessarily easy to keep track of so here is the entire story so far. I re-edited the first day as well as it was composed mainly in note form.
Krazyivan
2018-08-08 23:44:40 +0000 UTC
