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Voyage for Poon - Shot 9 - Help me choose!

So in the original Voyage for Poon comic, we get this nice half page reveal shot showing all the female crew members lined up in the cargo bay, on their hands and knees. 

Rather than just cut to that shot, I want to do something a little more ambitious for the animation. I want to have this super sweet looking shot where the camera tracks back wards along the line of crewmen, revealing the everything and finally settling on the final shot with the Maje and Seska overlooking it all. 

I made a quick scene mockup (HQ Imgur link) using images cut out from the original comic pages, (they will all be drawn over like the rest of the shots I've done). I also copied the Janeway image to use in place of all the other crew members (it won't be a dozen Janeways in the final shot, but each female member of the crew). 

There are 4 different possibilities for the camera motion here, and I can't decide which works best. This isn't the final motion for any of the angles, I'll be doing tweaks regardless, but I need to pick out the best concept for the shot. 

So... help?

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No sure if this'll be of help but, for what its worth, I find that Angle #1 & Angle #3 better set the tone(?, dunno if thats the right word) of their submission.

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