Atheris POV: Chapter 7 (City scene)
Added 2025-05-26 12:44:18 +0000 UTCHi! I finished this one yesterday. Let me know if there are any other POVs you'd like to see. I have a few ideas, but I'd love to hear yours
Hi! I finished this one yesterday. Let me know if there are any other POVs you'd like to see. I have a few ideas, but I'd love to hear yours too
Atheris POV: Chapter 7 (City scene)
Thanks so much for the support and I hope you have a great week!
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I would also love a perspective from Xavier's pov through living in Rhivenia or the knights that train the royal family too. Their feelings on certain actions taken or how they want things done.
Momo-Michi Sachi
2025-07-20 05:34:26 +0000 UTCOkay so after playing it a few more times, I have more to say. I love the difference between lying and not lying to the family. I love how she's deeply hurt by the prince(ss) not telling the truth but when they do she empathizes with the thief and sees herself doing what they would do. I also love how, yeah, she IS bitter and unhappy she wasn't chosen, but she accepts it and also sees how her youngest sibling's kindness (I chose to not sabotage and let people near because they weren't dangerous) might just be what the kingdom needs and how it compares to Richard. I also feel bad for Richard because he had NO ONE to be on his side constantly and reassure him. He was always seen as a tool, which Alvena even admits how she saw Atheris at first. But Atheris had Freya and us, she had support and people who would have her back (not that this is Richard's fault, Alvena did throw a wrench in that plan). EDIT: Also, Atheris saying that Richard had nothing hits harder now that I re-read what I typed. He really had no one on his side (except possibly us) and I think that's what's really tragic about what we see and how I'm interpreting it. Anyways with that over, to answer your question about other POVs: Someone else said it, but the ROs pov when first meeting the Prince(ss) (I lean towards to Nicholas and Daemir) ROs when you choose to dance with them would also be fun, especially if you get drunk lol Freya would be interesting because while she's always supportive and happy for us, I do want to see what she actively thinks. Final suggestion would be someone's POV to us being chosen by the sword.
xXNightSparrowXx .
2025-05-28 16:45:21 +0000 UTCloved it also a Lena POV would be awesome
Kayla F
2025-05-26 22:22:02 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie after reading this I understand why Atheris feels like Richard is a threat and needs to go. Atheris genuinely wanted the crown and yet she isn’t letting that cloud her judgement (or her love for her younger sibling, if you choose to be close with your sisters) the way Richard is. She’s also probably viewing the situation from the perspective of an older sibling and genuinely feels that Richard is putting her little sister or brother in danger. At the same time, I do still feel some sympathy for Richard despite how he’s acting because I don’t think he would care about having the crown if Charles (and even Isabelle to an extent) didn’t make him feel like he’s a failure as a son for not getting it. It’s all just so complicated and sad
Danielle
2025-05-26 20:29:04 +0000 UTCOmg I love Atheris, so glad to have her POV. I am humbly asking for Raleigh’s POV at Richard’a birthday or the Everan twins pov upon meeting the heirs
Lo
2025-05-26 19:22:30 +0000 UTCOugh, Atheris, my sweet sister, I WILL protect you or die trying I swear...
xXNightSparrowXx .
2025-05-26 18:58:59 +0000 UTCIt was really enjoyible to read. :) But I wonder about Freya, reading something from her POV would be nice.
Cankut Değerli
2025-05-26 16:19:02 +0000 UTCTry the link in the post again, it should be fixed
Nutella Queen
2025-05-26 16:08:46 +0000 UTCI cant acess it I get following error:Oops! Sorry for the inconvenience, but the page you try to access cannot be found. You will need to contact the author for more information.
HarleyQueen
2025-05-26 16:05:49 +0000 UTCI enjoyed reading it! It was awesome! Can't wait to read more of Demir point of view and probably Freya too.
Kalyx Wynthor
2025-05-26 15:23:59 +0000 UTCHaha, I’m always pretty random when it comes to writing side content. I just go with whatever I feel motivated to write at the moment :) Thanks for the ideas, they’re super helpful!
Nutella Queen
2025-05-26 12:50:29 +0000 UTCOh, Chapter 7 one, huh? I wpuld have expected the first Atheris POV would be the theater trip. More MC choices to work with. Glad to have it anyway. It has been fascinating getting a look into Charles's mind, but he gotta give room to the others too. And I have more than enough POV ideas for you (don't know if i posted this before, sorry): • Richard’s POV of the lake scene • ROs' POVs of their first meeting with MC • Freya's POV of the talk with MC about Ernald • Maevra's POV of tailing Freya's meeting with Ernald • Richard’s POV of the dual (would be quite short if MC refuses the dual, so maybe you can start when Richard duals Nicholas, as MC has options there) • Charles’s POV of when he revealed to his kids that he'd been poisoned • Atheris's POV of the theatre trip
Bessie Burnet
2025-05-26 12:47:27 +0000 UTC
