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Pokemon, Chapter 42: Making Do

Hey everyone, here's the latest chapter! Hope you enjoy it, and looking forward to any feedback, as always :)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9794740/42/Pokemon-The-Origin-of-Species

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These are pretty clever, and 5 in particular is going to be addressed next chapter :)

Daystar Eld

Glad you enjoyed it :) Sorry if the fault in the gym battle was on my end, if there's some part that didn't seem clear in particular let me know!

Daystar Eld

Writing this seperately, since they are two completely different trains of thought. Awesome chapter! I think the gym battle lost me a little, but ive been sick which means I dont comprehend as fast, but am unwilling to read slower. Slightly disappointed that there wasnt more focus on the evolution :P Great read, posting here mostly because you need to have something going on over here, instead of all feedback being on Reddit. Im also posting a strategy thing for bill, but mostly because I feel he gave up easily, but I suppose that can happen whejn you have been hit over the head with the same problem for long enough

So, Bill's stategy ideas: 1. Red is a clever kid, with a proper "research paper" on pokeballs and a lab with sufficient tools (no idea where they would get that), he might be able to make a couple "custom" pokeballs. 2. If pokeballs are that hard to work on, Bill probably has a few handy. If Bill told red to work on his mind reading, he could "accidentally" have red steal some. 3. At a future date he could wire red some pidgey's with "high 'other' stats" already in custom pokeballs, red could then transfer them and reuse the ball.(Needs to be paired with another communication method) 4. His AI could give red some, without direct intervention. (Hey, I had her put together some traveling supplies so you can make sure to get to vermillion on time) 5. Red could have his abra's "emergency transit" spot be bills lab. As he is psychic in the long term this wouldnt hurt his ability to move around much.(if someone finds out bill says "A crying kid showed up in my house begging me to pokeball his dead mom, what was I supposed to do? I have the balls because Ive been researching it for years now.) My brain is telling me that I am missing an obvious plan, but I cannot think of it at the moment.


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