Women's Prison - dangerous prisoner (second part)
Added 2023-07-03 20:16:03 +0000 UTCCertain prisoners are too dangerous to be rehabilitated. In these cases, a special procedure is implemented. Through a combination of regular rough usage and psychoactive substances, it is possible to rewrite a prisoner's identity. Even her most important memories can be overwritten.
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Thanks a lot!
Meeps123
2023-07-08 23:35:58 +0000 UTCOh my god!! I really like this rehabilitation program!!
EVELIA
2023-07-07 23:28:01 +0000 UTCYeah, that's why I said that you know best. You drew her, so it's not my place to tell you what is or isn't better, only how I would have written it. Still, a dangerous criminal in the future does sound fun, too. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, feel free to message me here on Fanbox or on Pixiv. Writing prison stories is kind of the thing that I do, so I'd be happy to help flesh out some characters if you need!
2023-07-07 07:41:24 +0000 UTCI guess I just didn't picture her that way when I drew her. I like the idea of one of the prisoners being some kind of dangerous villain though. Maybe a mob boss or something.
Meeps123
2023-07-07 00:39:06 +0000 UTCWell, if I was writing this story, I would have made her into a serial killer or a terrorist. Someone who is truly irredeemable and stands no chance of ever being rehabilitated, not even through Leda's many programs. She'll always be dangerous to others, and so this warrants the rewriting of her personality and past. If she was just a gamer who downloaded games, I feel like you could break her very easily even without such drastic measures. Gamers are meek and submissive by nature, even if it takes a bit of breaking to get them to admit it (source: I am a gamer). However, this is how I would write it. Ultimately this is your story, and your world, and so you know best what would fit into it and what wouldn't.
2023-07-05 18:54:07 +0000 UTCYeah, I was thinking her original crime was videogame piracy, but then she made things worse by trying to bite her visitors. Maybe you would have preferred if she committed a more serious crime though?
Meeps123
2023-07-04 21:20:51 +0000 UTCHe said in the last post that she pirated videogames lmao.
2023-07-04 13:48:56 +0000 UTCCmon, what did she dooo! Tell us!
Cobbly
2023-07-04 04:13:25 +0000 UTC
