The cost of a dream | Chapter 4
Added 2025-03-25 10:16:46 +0000 UTCHere's the fourth chapter of the story. Time to welcome a new addition to the family!
Comments
That was the main idea about this story, becoming ethnic to stand out and become a diva, albeit an over sexualized one. And for once, not a traditional, modest Middle Eastern woman. Hannah is certainly not the best candidate given her bigoted family but we'll see.
Alex94
2025-03-27 09:17:59 +0000 UTCThis is developing beautifully. It's interesting how a common theme with RC fiction relate to characters turning more humble, but in this story, the opposite seems to be happening. The parallels you've made with Mia Khalifa so far are spot on. And I love how she's in the process of creating her own race-changed family. Hopefully, she'll be able to sway Hannah to her side.
Wolfram
2025-03-26 17:07:13 +0000 UTCYea.
Al Boudreaux
2025-03-25 22:06:47 +0000 UTCYeah, why not including someone a little older for once?
Alex94
2025-03-25 22:05:32 +0000 UTCThat's great to hear!
Alex94
2025-03-25 22:05:12 +0000 UTCNice new addition to the story.
Al Boudreaux
2025-03-25 20:01:55 +0000 UTCThis chapter was very good, hit some key things for me. Your fiction is a joy.
Meph
2025-03-25 10:39:58 +0000 UTC
